Try to avoid “in… in…” patterns. Use adjectives or adverbs to soothe the reader’s eye and ear.
1) “In an interview in 2001, Obama states…”
vs.
“In a 2001 interview, Obama states…”
2) “In general in Atwood’s work…”
vs.
“Atwood’s work generally…”
This and the other tips for this academic year are available at:
http://www2.arnes.si/~bjason/LW%20tips.pdf
(Skupno 13 obiskov, današnjih obiskov 1)